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romance 1 min read 511 views May 8, 2015

us, sunset and la jolla sunset...cali

beneath our feet

the rhythmic tides

swept salty sands to and fro

as we walked together

alone in our solitude…

 

silent thoughts swayed

to the serene symphony

of winds and waves:

our spiritual souls sprouting

anew on the edges of time…

 

suddenly our eyes met

and aroused smiles parted moist lips

as we watched the sun

kiss the undulating water:

gently laying his warm head

in the calming wetness of her bosom.

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The Immortal Wize

Really nice poem.

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SYQ222

Thats sizzles! Your language and rhythm is on point as always..

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mlowe5

Poetwize and SYQ222, much love and appreciation to you both for your time given to offfer feedback to this piece that was written so long ago. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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mlowe5

love_supreme, many thanks. Much appreciated. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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love_supreme

Very nice

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