mlowe5
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romance
beneath our feet
the rhythmic tides
swept salty sands to and fro
as we walked together
alone in our solitude…
silent thoughts swayed
to the serene symphony
of winds and waves:
our spiritual souls sprouting
anew on the edges of time…
suddenly our eyes met
and aroused smiles parted moist lips
as we watched the sun
kiss the undulating water:
gently laying his warm head
in the calming wetness of her bosom.
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The Immortal Wize says: Really nice poem. |
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SYQ222 says: Thats sizzles! Your language and rhythm is on point as always.. |
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mlowe5 says: Poetwize and SYQ222, much love and appreciation to you both for your time given to offfer feedback to this piece that was written so long ago. Peace and Love, mlowe5 |
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mlowe5 says: love_supreme, many thanks. Much appreciated. Peace and Love, mlowe5 |
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