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life 1 min read 377 views May 19, 2015

you made me

I hope you come to appreciate the souls that I stole for you and all the hearts that I broke for you I let true love ones go for you I even swallowed my pride and spoke lies for you denied for you. cried for you. spilled other people's blood for you I put on these fake faces for you never able to tell you the truth my heart said go but my mind said stay no dress rehearsal because I don't wanna play you see.? or maybe you don't maybe you need clear eye so you can get the vision maybe you need to sit down and take a time out. detention. I dont need a whole lot of metaphors to catch your attention honestly I'm just trying to get you to listen my love is like an oasis to you endless and refreshing I hope one day you come to appreciate me as you're blessing

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2b2b2

Nice Flow...thanks for sharing!

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