“J-jay”

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inpsirational 1 min read 480 views May 23, 2015

Nature

Let the trees wave at me

Let the grass feel soft to me

Let the flowers blossom for me

Let the sun shine on me

Let the wind carry me

Let the lightening awaken me

Let the tornado whip me

Let the rain drown me

Let the desert kill me

Let the water fill me

Surprise me

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mlowe5

Nice. Like the flow to the "surprising" end! A very peaceful write with such live imagery. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love.

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