“J-jay”

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life 1 min read 370 views May 23, 2015

The Journey

Your body feels numb

Your hands are frozen

Your mouth is dry

Your legs are stiff

Your eyes are stinging

Your heart is hurting

You don't know what to do

You keep walking

Feeling pain getting worse

 

 

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