“J-jay”

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first love 1 min read 418 views May 26, 2015

YOUNG IN LOVE

We were young when I first saw you, I thought I was daydreaming,

I felt a connection between us, but I guess I was young in love,

I thought we could be together, but the truth hurts, I thought I knew you but as I said I was young in love, when I see you I feel embarrassed,

I loved you but I made a fool out of myself, I followed my heart and ended somewhere I can't get out of,

I fell for you words, I'm young in love, I remember wanting to see you everyday and now your making me shiver,

I'm dying of your lying, why can't this love end? You've changed me into someone else, I'm use to waiting but the pain has to stop!

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