“J-jay”

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life 1 min read 447 views May 29, 2015

LIFTED

Your head is hurting as if your being punched, your lungs are gasping for oxygen, your eyes are stinging,

your body is shivering, your arms are itching,  your heart is banging away

lightening hits your heart, an explosion fills the air, your face looks like ash, your lips are twitching your eyes are wondering

your soul is being lifted, you feel your last breathe trapped underground, you know your dead, but you feel more alive than ever

you feel no pain, no love, you don't even know what pain feels like or what love is anymore, 

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