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first love 2 min read 424 views Jun 4, 2015

Love at its Best

From the moment that I saw you, I was hooked Couldn't tell you the truth because of how it would look Feelings got deeper the more we talked Still couldn't express myself Had to put those feelings on halt Day after day I came up with the words to say Still couldn't explain myself I was too shy to say Now, I'm like *** it You only live once, I should tell him how I feel and get it over and done I can love you better than your last Take your chance with me And I'll help you forget about your past I know you not ready We can grow together Take it nice and steady And we will shine through any weather I can hold you down Stand by your side I can be your ride or die I'm not a fan of games So with your heart I will not play I love hard and I'll always be here to stay No need to feel insecure I'll be everything you want and more Just say the word and I'm all yours I can love you better than your last Take your chance with me And I'll help you forget about your past I know you not ready We can grow together Take it nice and steady And we will shine through any weather I don't need to act to play the role So no need to worry My heart is solid like gold I don't know what it is about you But the way you make me feel I can't live without you I'm addicted to your drug You got me strung out and gone Got bit by the bug I think I'm in love You were the man in my dreams God opened my eyes So that I could see How good of a man that you could be Bless my heart and bless my soul I'm ready to let this river flow Just remember: I can love you better than your last Take your chance with me And I'll help you forget about your past I know you not ready We can grow together Take it nice and steady And we will shine through any weather

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love_supreme

I love this. Excellent write.

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Uniquely_poetic

Thank you!

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qtp_21

BEAUTIFUL!!!!! GOD BLESS YOU and I hope all is well I LOVED your word play on this poem and how you repeated a certain line I love that! keep on This poem here is amazing God bless you

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Uniquely_poetic

Thank you very much. I really appreciate that.

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love_supreme

I like this poem.

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