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life 2 min read 841 views Jun 9, 2015

God, do you hear me?

God, do you hear me?

Are you listening too?

Sometimes when I talk to you

I feel like a fool

Asking for forgiveness

Time and time again

Making the same mistakes

Acting out the same sins

I know you love me

More than I love you

Yet you still stay

And do the things you do

I promise Heavenly Father

I will get this life right

I will be just like you want me

An Angel taking flight

God, do you hear me?

I know I’m on your time

I try to be patient

Not complain or whine

I am your child

Made in the image of you

Yet I sometimes struggle

To give the praises you’re due

Your love is the best love

It’s time that I see

Only your love will come free

Love of the flesh

It’s just too high

A broken heart

A Broken home

Is not worth the ride

God, do you hear me?

I pray that you do

I am sorry for

All the hurt and pain

 That I have caused you

I know you expect the best from me

For all the things you do

Thank you God

Because I don’t deserve

A loving God like you

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BoRhyme

I can most definitely relate to this, I'm sure most people can, hard to do right with so much temptation out here! Good Write!

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mrmelody7

Can also relate very well to this write nicely presented a great share

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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