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life 1 min read 692 views Jul 9, 2015

Heavenly Father

Heavenly father be with me

See me allow me to dwell in your thoughts

Commune with me that i may become a part
of your memory

A part of your entity

Existing in the stars

And it aint hard for one to see

Where your spirit is there is liberty

And all is free that dwell in your care

Please hear my prayer

Dear Lord

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2b2b2

Nice Sentiment....thanks for sharing!

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Charles2

expand and express...

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Charles2

love that you can open yourself up to the possibility with positivity. in focus with balance.

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Jay Beach

Nice. Seems like there's so much more to be said though.

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amin901

Thank you

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WarriorCarryingWater

Amen - nice!

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