“you have it... but yet, you feel incomplete. This sweet, sweet life”

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life 1 min read 454 views Jul 11, 2015

Me

hmm
who are you? 
who lies behind those eyes? 
who are you? 
whos creamy, soft, brown skin
the way you lick your lips.
the way you use your eyes in such,
... such a suductive way.
who are you? 
who lies beneath those eyes?
"oh Scorpio... my little Scorpio"
the mysterious scorpio!
but...
but is that you?
tell me,
who are you? 
the way you think..
oh how intelligent.
the way you think..
oh how quick and stern.
the way you think..
oh how I want to figure you out.
who are you?
your inconsistent behaviors,
they confuse me.
your broad state of mind,
it keeps me wondering,
what if?
what if there's no you?
what if there's no forever?
what if?
but you, 
you stay wondering.
you stay going.
you stay moving.
so again,
who are you?
who lies beneath those eyes?
who are you? 
.....
 who are you??
I think..
you is me. 

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love_supreme

Excellent write. I loved this!

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maryjane3

Thank you, means a lot!

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LP45

Nice write maryjane3. Thanks for sharing.

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2b2b2

Tight Capture.....yes Scorpios rock!! Namaste

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maryjane3

thank yall so much it means a lot! God Bless! #Namaste

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Kingqadardwon'

Great work

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MaryJane3

Wow. Thank you, I wrote this years ago... still an amazing read. Ase.

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