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life 1 min read 581 views Jul 18, 2015

Just as you left me

in the middle a storm so terrible

i could not find my way alone

 

i was blindly wandering to find any shelter w

here i might find a safe haven

 

until the storm blew over

knowing my heart was still strong

 

through all the tension, anguish

and pain of it all my love ran true

 

even though you left me to the wind,

you left me to fend for myself,

 

sure that’s something almost any man can do,

but you left me without a dream to hold on to

 

what on earth were you trying to do

lead me to somebody else?

 

i don’t want to be somebody else’s fool

i wanted you no questions asked

 

but, where were you when i needed you

you know i wanted you needed you,

 

begging you, pleading for you 

to take the time to keep me going baby,

 

there’s something about me you don’t know

i am a mystic man,

 

ever seeing, ever knowing

now, i am found and growing

 

just as you left me

 

C2

 

 

 

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LP45

Great write Charles2. Love the flow. No one should weather a storm alone but from time to time it happens to the best of us and all along as your last line reads, you turned out just fine. Thank you for sharing this.

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