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life 1 min read 394 views Aug 1, 2015

Ungrateful

I have a fetish for neglecting things that I should cherish.

 Once I realize its true value, those moments have already perished.

 Who's at fault when our time becomes essence-less?

 When we begin to question our coexistence.

 How do we make each moment resemble something of elegance?

 Time must be at our mercy because time is merciless.

  Forgive my sins and all my sins that may become friends.

 The time I have left only depends.

 Many circumstances.

 Moments left up to chances.

 I surrender to pessimistic thoughts on multiple occasions.

 Only make moves when motivation is provided by mental persuasion.

 Or when exteriors give me a motive.

 Sometimes I fail to see the reason for the worth of pursuance.

 Coagulated thoughts then become a nuisance.

 Time never waits, so I watch time with prudence.

 So maybe my time can be continued, rather than in conclusion.

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DallasCowgirl

Very captivating. Your words are inspiring. Keep writing.

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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