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life 1 min read 592 views Aug 1, 2015

Message 4-1-1

Hi haters

Yall must sacrifice a lot of time

Buzzing noisy when the light of real shines

Or busy trapping excuses like "why oh why"

Concerned about everybody else

Except what's on your own dime

Hogging fresh air for the next hater line

And as expected miserable and blind

Oblivious to your slow destruction

Of what used to be your heart and mind

So let me dumb down reality and slow down time

Get you some business and stay out of mine

 

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Charles2

cute. clever

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