arising on a poetic morning...
as the sharp rays
of sunlight
meticulously sliced
through lingering clouds
to sculpt away the web of darkness
of night
i broke off a piece of time
and used its jagged edges
to scrape away the corroded pain
of doubt
so today, I will
pull out words
from the womb
of my mind
and paint images of life
on a paper canvas---
chisel out a song of love
and fell and smell
the warm breath of God
soothing my sweet serene soul
thus would if you would---arise---
come journey with me
in the ecstasy of poetic odyssey---
and wander the Odin-like caverns
of the fertile womb of my mind’s coming
to meet the morning’s beautiful dawning.

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Great Write
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Delightful Read
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Fm110comphodent and 2b2b2, thank you two for the read and feedback. Most welcomed. Peace and Love.
Read mlowe5's poemsDallasCowgirl
Beautiful write. Thanks for sharing.
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superb
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Thanks, love_supreme. Glad you enjoyed this write. Peace and Love, mlowe5.
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ONE, underhiswings7 and C2.. Peace and Love, mlowe5.
Read mlowe5's poemsLP45

Absolutely awesome. Love the wordplay and imagery in every line. Thank you for sharing this. Sir Lowe. Namaste.
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Thanks for the inspiring feedback, LP45. Much appreciated. Peace and Love.
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