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lightness in the dark

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arising on a poetic morning...

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as the sharp rays

of sunlight

meticulously sliced

through lingering clouds

to sculpt away the web of darkness

of night

 i broke off a piece of time

and used its jagged edges

to scrape away the corroded pain

of doubt

 

so today, I will

pull out words

from the womb

of my mind

and paint images of life

on a paper canvas---

chisel out a song of love

and fell and smell

the warm breath of God

soothing my sweet serene soul

 

thus would if you would---arise---

come journey with me

in the ecstasy of poetic odyssey---

and wander the Odin-like caverns

of the fertile womb of my mind’s coming

to meet the morning’s beautiful dawning.

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Fm110comphodent says:

Great Write

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2b2b2 says:

Delightful Read

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mlowe5 says:

Fm110comphodent and 2b2b2, thank you two for the read and feedback. Most welcomed. Peace and Love.

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DallasCowgirl says:

Beautiful write. Thanks for sharing.

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Charles2 says:

superb

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mlowe5 says:

Thanks, love_supreme. Glad you enjoyed this write. Peace and Love, mlowe5.
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mlowe5 says:

ONE, underhiswings7 and C2.. Peace and Love, mlowe5.

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LP45 says:

Absolutely awesome. Love the wordplay and imagery in every line. Thank you for sharing this. Sir Lowe. Namaste.
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mlowe5 says:

Thanks for the inspiring feedback, LP45. Much appreciated. Peace and Love.

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