Awards

Karma 28,700 Blood stone Lightness in the dark

Poems snapshot

204Total poems
105,085Lifetime views
0Last 7 days
0Last 30 days
0Last 90 days
0Last 365 days

Join free to nominate, save, follow and join this poet's camp.

life 2 min read 620 views Sep 6, 2015

shorty story

Shorty was bout 25 she needed a best friend her mother just died her heart felt torn her boyfriends in the state pen so she went out to the clubs frustrated and down she walks with a frown she's ordering drinks so shorty starting to get buck wild Flashes in her head Of Her Mother Funeral So She's Taking Extra Shots Now So She Meets This Guy In The Club She's Giving Him Kisses And hugs they get ready to leave the club walking toward the car shorty and ken takes off driving into the night shorty pulls out some powder and snorts up her nose ken snorts two lines so there swerving lane to lane speed limit is 55 the dash says 85 and it's starting to rain the music volume is up so Ken rubs on her legs then starts to finger shorty playing with her vaigina shorty trying her best to focus on the road but her eyes is rolling to the back of her head she closes her eyes again and a amtrack train is speeding ahead railroad tracks lights are flashing bright red clearly showing STOP but shorty is to waisted so she finally open her eyes slammed on her brakes and slid into the train shorty car goes up in flames Ken is screaming Lord help me please but really it's to late because 911 is moving to slow trapped in a burning car that's hot like burning coals shorty Hollaring screaming dieing from smoke ventilation Ken is already lost conscience the fire department has arrived so the driver side window is getting busted open they grabbed shorty out immediately pumped her full of air shorty is looking pail but the paremedics said she will live ken is dead as a shot dear shorty is in the hospital recovering from her injuries court date already set so shorty should play dead because her life is already over she should of stayed sober but it's to late because shorty life is all over.

Discussions (0)

No discussions yet. Start one to ask about a line, share what the poem meant to you, or talk craft with other members.

Log in to start a discussion about this poem.

Comments (4)

Join free to commentPoets read every comment, and every one you leave earns karma. Registration is FREE.

Join free Log in
Contest winner

amin901

Nice poem

Read amin901's poems

Tmartin The Poet!

Thanks G!

Read Tmartin The Poet!'s poems

twistedbeauty

this was a very moving piece. great write.

Read twistedbeauty's poems
Contest winner

Charles2

tragic... well said. sad end

Read Charles2's poems

login below

Forgot your username?

 
Poets read every comment. Join free to comment, follow and save poems. Join free