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life 1 min read 527 views Sep 21, 2015

Hugs that Hold Waves

Candles burn a picture of years,

Hugs that hold waves.

Embracing particles of dust that matter,

Mentally misbehave.

The voices of cheetah,

Finally caught,

The spots of her memories,

The clump of her paw,

Accelerating her chords,

Fat hugs she admires,

Consciously clinging,

A wave of fire.

What vision is blind to stop what I C,

Appearing afar the wave I leap,

Our hugs become waves in the ocean,

Drowned by the fire of blood and emotion.

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tinesia30

Great work my brother. Love covers a multitude of sin

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2b2b2

Brilliant Scribez.....ONE

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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