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life 2 min read 604 views Sep 23, 2015

Brenda Story

Brenda was 17 her father was on drugs her mother died when she was born her heart feels torn no love from her daddy so the streets she roamed no love at her home Brenda not even enrolled in school her pimp is her teacher prostitution is her job Brenda stayed in and out of jail her life is hell her daddy rapes and beat her but she rather not tell no woman around to guide her Brenda best friends is hookers and they all is like sisters but one day Brenda was fed up she went to see her dad and put a gun to his head and said dad your better off dead then Blew out his brains Brenda packed her bags then went and shot her pimp and stepped over him and said now who's the b*tch Brenda took all his cash then drove to the amtrack and disappeared and never came back homicide is on the case 8 months of investigating still no signs of brenda Brenda was on the run destined to be free she tried to escape to Canada they busted her at the border now brenda life is all over the only thoughts that's going through her head is that she wishes she was dead thoughts of her mother because she never got a change to meet her Brenda went to court the judge gave her life with out parole so Brenda went to prison and made it to her cell three months later Brenda commited suicide and hung her self in her cell!

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Hsanan

I love it. People tend to sugar coat life, as if there are always happy endings. Some people know hell and nothing more. This piece has great rhythm. Though it is told like a story. It has a flow to it that pulls it all together well

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