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life 1 min read 463 views Oct 5, 2015

paper doll

you at you standing tall looking like a paper doll 

with your long hair flowing and your white teeth showing your looks alone can get it all

but you're missing one thing personality you couldn't have bought it or got it from me but don you worry girl hopes thats not all you have o show cause in the end its was never how you look but what you know

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Charles2

nice phrasing. hope you break it down into phases to showcase some nice lines

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love_supreme

Very nice

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