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life 2 min read 309 views Oct 21, 2015

What We See

We look at women daily

Crossing the street

A passing wave

A nod hello

 

What do we see?

A pretty beauty

A plain Jane

A sad girl

A lonely girl

A snob

A good mother

A working woman

A bi**ch

 

We never know the pain held inside

Deeds done when alone

A child left alone and cold

She was given to the streets

The system she was thrown 

 

Men as she grew took the place of a parents love

Love she thought she found was not within these men

Beautiful children came from these men

 

Left alone

She tried and tried to overcome

The pain

The stress

The disappointment in herself

Sometimes it’s too much

She goes to work on the bus

Comes home and gathers the children

Sits in her home

Alone

Thinking of all that’s right

She sees only wrong

She walks down the hall

She has to end it all

 

The oldest first

She takes his life

She moves on to the next swift straight cuts to the little boys and girls necks

She reaches the youngest

She sees the innocence

Knows it will be corrupted

She has to end it

She takes the baby’s breath with a lingering kiss

 

She cleans them all dresses them and lines them against the far wall

She stands at their feet

She feels she has given the ultimate Mothers Love

Proud of her deed

She sleeps in peace

 

She wakes and leaves

You see her on the street

A head nod hello

A passing wave

She is pleasant, friendly enough

What you don’t know?

 Her children bleed out on the living room floor

What do you see?

 

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