Who U R (response to the poem"Who I B" by Freshy Montana)
"Who u R".... Who u R is who I need u to be, word ***in me verbally, makin me cum mentally, touching me ever so sensually, like u was what God sent to me.....erasing memory of other z, they dead to me...u made me charge em to tha game like a casualty... Who u R is a shot, all tha way up in my veins, racing to my Aorta....pumpin strait thru my body..kinda like a drug sort of.......u sort of like candy ...real sweet, stuck in my teeth suckin on u rite now even as we speak.... U got me stuck like a leech! Who u R is a breath of fresh air, tha wind in my hair on a breezy kind of day...sometimes u have me speechless I don't know what to say... U give me butterflies, ur tha sun on a cloudy day, a long walk in tha park...ur my flashlight when I'm lost in tha dark....Me without u is like a car with no wheels, a lady without heels, a junkie with no pills.... Who u are is a blessing to me, u take stressing from me, I'm fallin in love with who u be....when we talkin on the phone , verbal kisses n hugs, & lil back rubs..... Look what I let u do to me, who u R is who another can never be....I know u locked away in a penitentiary but u take all tha pain away from me.....when I feel crazy ur my sanity....who u R is who I need u to be...please don't ever take this away from me



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Join free Log inJay Beach
Dope poem. Love the wordplay and the imagery. Thanks for sharing.
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Nice 100
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Brilliant...ya killed it....."drop the mic" style...thanks for sharing!
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Very nice
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