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romance 2 min read 680 views Nov 10, 2015

Who I B (Written by Freshy Montana)

"Who i b" ..........................who I b? The complexion of hennesy, dark brown skin or mahogany. That will be caressing verbally, rain upon u mentally, poetically, leaving puddles of my sensual philosophy locked in memory. I'll have u feeling me (spiritually free ).from my scripted delivery between your legs warm and tingly, from a romantic prophecy in my poetry i b your answer to life's perplexity. With a mind that reaches far beyond the walls of this penitentiary. I make misery end happily,with a product so pure only the naked eye coud see.I make that inner loneliness retire, keeping u hotter than a Phoenix fire, the eye of your desire.,thats makes your flesh perspire, for my inspired levels of intimacy that reach higher. And higher the majesty of this black messiah. Jus for u to admire. Im the bad guy, but only in the heat of passion will I make u kry from from being to deep inside my lady thats a tru story, a real man dnt have to lie. I'll always speak the truth nothing to keep u pacified, life's a rough ride the more u go through the better, the hard times makes the good ones treasures, and builds a bond thats forged in forever so let trials and tribulation, sexual frustration in every notion bring us together. Whether friendship or just a pen pal companion. Jus kno that you'll get conversation from me deeper than the grand canyon. And feel the pain and passion in every word written by this champion of understanding ...!!!

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love_supreme

The flow on this is tight.

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Jay Beach

I agree. The flow is definitely on point. I love seeing words in poems that I dont usually see as well. Keep that pen moving sista, you're talented.

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Goddess Bee

Thanks y'all but this is actually written by my sweetheart he's VERY talented and we ink so well together

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Just_Me_Kelee

Nice pen, love i

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Just_Me_Kelee

Nice pen, love it

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love_supreme

I like this poem.

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