“I’m baccccccc”

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inpsirational 2 min read 480 views Nov 17, 2015

bacc then/ somewhere along the way/and now

bacc in the day we use to roll up with no hesitation not that we needed to that was just a bonus to our happiness bacc in the day I could stay something goofy and you'd laugh instantly bacc in the day I was the one to express to you just how beautiful you really are and to make your flaws your strengths bacc then I didn't have much and secretly that made me mad I wanted to do for you what you did for me i wanted to express to you just how much i loved you you bought me clothes you bought me shoes you always kept me fed bacc then I was in love (still am) bacc then I was truly happy but somewhere along the way I got greedy and only cared about my self-happiness not that I was demanding more but somewhere along the way I've changed somewhere along the way I got consumed by greed somewhere along the way I became the man I swear I'd never be I lied and even went as far as cheating while we were (engaged) I don't want you to move on probably should have thought of that before I cheated now the only thing that ties us together is our baby now I'm over here hurting just much as i hurt you I love you I always have I love everything about you and always have

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Te'ArraPoetry

Good poem. Seem like you was in love. Love is a beautiful feeling. ;)

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