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romance 2 min read 846 views Nov 20, 2015

Let Me Take His Place

Let Me Take His Place

I lay here, and you lay over there.

We're both wondering who's getting the best loving.

You know how I watch you, and I know how you watch me too.

There's some curiosity in our mind--- MIND.

We've been in that intriguing eying mode- blinking like Morse code.

[I really don't know how your man is serving you in the bed]

[But there's a slight indication that the sex may be dead.]

Let me take his place. Let me take his place.

Let me cure your body of its sexual intentions

Let me take his place. Let me take his place.

Let me infiltrate your body with deep love injections.

Let the long awaited fantasies come alive.

All that intriguing and curiosity we've been holding inside,

Let the thoughts and feelings come alive.

We've got to do this up right, skin tight.

Together we can count the rounds,

'Cause I telling you, there won't be know going down.

Let me take his place. Woman Let me take his place.

I lay here, and you lay over there.

We're both wondering who's getting the best loving. who's getting the best loving

I lay here, and you lay over there.

We're both wondering who's getting the best loving. who's getting the best loving

Let me take his place. Let me take his place.

let me cure your body of its sexual intentions

Let me take his place. Let me take his place.

let me infiltrate your body with deep love injections.

Let me take his place. Let me take his place.

 

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Captivating! love this poem.

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