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life 1 min read 552 views Dec 6, 2015

Lookin out

 

I don't mean to offend you

my pain is an issue, I'm trying to

get rid of, I am not ashamed to say

I didn't get any sugar and kisses were bitter

any love I have ever known

has left me and gone home

still I am not alone, still holding on

like I'm about to fall off

everyone who ever fell

knows that the grounds not soft

broken bones is too much loss 

of time too fall asleep , waking up in pine

I don't like the smell wood, that's hard to shine

my ancient, antique pinnacle mind

tells me the time the tone will be

without looking on the wall

Damn! what if it's too late for me

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