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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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when you broke my heart
I thought, it was gas pains
and I just needed to fart
when we had to part
I felt intense pangs
way too many things
left for rags, too many bags
1st one free, next one
under 50 lbs. 15 dollars
and the next one 30
that gray dog is dirty
where's the gray goose
I'm thirsty, the bus is filthy
the bathroom is assy nasty
I'm innocent but feeling guilty
you took me apart as if you built me
now I see the big picture
in pieces like a 1000 piece 
jig saw puzzle
I opened my mouth, now it's muzzled
I need a guzzle

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kingqadardwon' says:

This is outstanding Wize! What a magical pen..

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DallasCowgirl says:

"I'm innocent but feeling guilty you took me apart as if you built me"....Bravo! Nice write.

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