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life 1 min read 340 views Dec 22, 2015

Deal Door

Playing with meek, slaving for Jesus

The ale of the negro hymn,

Patterns repeated emotions,

A habit above the rim,

Disguising she met frankly my dear,

Gone in the wind leading cheers,

Why don’t U play with Jesus commercials,

And slave with the meek condemned,

A deal door more keen to thrive,

Erasing all the levels,

She needs to arrive.

 

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