You got inside of me, u got in thru my ears....u dehydrated my eye ducts so now I don't make tears, not the kind that I used to cry, they're long gone & it took years, u got into my spirit so now I don't have fears......
You got inside my mouth and now when I open it, YOU speak...its like u possess my body & then afterwards I turn weak...& then u take over my body again and breathe life back inside of me............
You got into my heart cause if I get cut, u bleed. You make me wanna kill for our love like I'm in assassin's Creed. Me without you is like a blunt with no weed, It's kinda like driving a car with no speed......
Like "slave" without "free"........
The forest without trees, like having honey without bees...it's almost like I'd be having legs without knees..
Goddess Bee
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Poetiq1der says: Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...Hey there younger Sister! I see that you're kind of new here, so, Welcome! I loved this poem about love. There's so many different directions that one could go in intellectually to dissect your words. The man that you hold s torch for is not on your level of Love, so, therefore your Love "could" be Unrequited Love....Just a theory, not a spot on analysis :) I love Meter in Poetry, and Meter in Poetry is paramount to the construction of one's work....I loved your Meter, I loved your Message...I loved the rhyme scheme....Fabulous job! 1 Love/Peace |
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igotastory says: love this poem so much it just glued my eyes to the screen and i had to read more of it.. |
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