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life 1 min read 653 views Jan 23, 2016

Longing

Looking back at the times of yesterday and knowing that there is no return but, still longing for that good oh so good when life and love felt like it should.

Dancing back to the oldies and the old ones told me what I should do,  but I couldnt hear them...the music was too loud. Cant hear you.              

Grooving to the beats that ring high in my ear, they shut out the fear that  screams within me, so still I stay tuned on. 

Feeling for the passion that once enveloped and seemed to control me, but it has let go...I fear it has left me. 

Loving the looks of those who admired me, loved me and ate me with thier eyes, heard the lust in thier voices but I silenced the cries. 

Walked into my destiny with this manFox ringing me, his thoughts my passions and my wants he inspires...this is fire. 

Sex, vision, thoughts, creation and desire,

arrival, conception, life and we aspire, we get higher.

Glancing back on life as it used to be and moving it forward to peep the new woman I turned out to be.

Yes this is the new me. 

By Rhymechile 

 

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Poetiq1der

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...Damn Sister, you blew this piece up! I love meter in Poetry, which is so paramount to Poetry...Your meter was tight throughout. I was there with you on whatever stage you were performing this on. :) Poetry well written impresses me, as did this composition. "Loving the looks of those who admired me, loved me and ate me with their eyes, heard the lust in their voices, but I silenced the cries" Fabulous verse Sis....Respect!

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love_supreme

Excellent write.

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rhymechile

Thank you for the expressions of gratefulness.

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Corey

I enjoyed this inspiring piece! Loved the way you ended it!

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Love it

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