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first love 1 min read 363 views Jan 26, 2016

True Importance

I'm nothing but a kid lost in regret

Looking back at it all trying to forget the rest

Telling myself that there's no need to stress

But I know that lying to myself isn't for the best

She came into my life when her eyes took me in

I was lost for words and struck deeply within

Noticing no feeling of the wind on my skin as we gazed into each others eyes to understand their intentions

Blinded by beauty and love

We left it up to fate that reigned from above

As the time slipped it suddenly became rough

One mistake after another, she finally said "I had enough!"

He lost his purpose after one last glance

Trying to prove to her that he deserves one last chance

To let perfection slip through my hands makes me remember the laughs in the past

Clouded by sorrow, losing my grip fast

Now I understand the true importance of what I once had..

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Poetiq1der

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours....Very nicely articulated....

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Rzoned

Thank you !

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