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life 2 min read 546 views Jan 31, 2016

the light of the end

world oh world please do listen to me

Go on live by turning

When I needed you

atlist your friend's shadow stood by me

Thank god for you sun

Giving light

I would like to think its was all just for me

Not for you wanting to be seen

When my breaths run

And I no longer try to swoon

Just think of not me, beat to your tune

I believe not so far but soon

But you ,world

Didn't you want me out

With your leaves forward

Pointing at my weakest line

As if ididnt already beaten mine

As if I didnt sworn to walk and to fly is not to try

Forced like a magnet so dry

You keep sending the same seed with a flower painted beautifully

Its rotten roots who fear me

Running on top surface 

Kiss me don't be afraid to leave me

Its not like you ever stayed

Its not like I havent prayed

Had my way astrayed

For you and I to be played

It went well when you didn't

Was will to me when I did it

Like you ever asked was I up for it

Before you choose to meet

But you know for now,you can just leave it

So you can live by it

Lift to it

Cause I've been messed by wish

No full blame I knew it

Still walked to it

No don't please dont ask me still hurts

Blew my mind till I numb limits

All I wanted was just a few new prints

Just a few ears for my dying phrases

Hope is long gone not knowing where to it flees

Gave it up I think I'm no good to bore fruits

Exhausted so im happy to finally accept to loose

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love_supreme

"When my breaths run And I no longer try to swoon" - you really hit this poem with plenty of emotion.

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Number3

I love this....Word up Mellow

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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