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life 1 min read 705 views Feb 9, 2016

The Moon vs The Waves

My bare feet are close to the shore

Im ready to jump into the ocean

Ready to jump into the sea

A sea full of lust and temptation and the waves...

...The waves are calling my name

And I.....I have been thinking about answering them

You, you are my moon

And even though you are so far, you are so close

We are involved in a covenant that the ocean is secluded from

We have a bond that the ocean and I do not

We are one, while the ocean and I are seperate entities

Its funny, the moon creates the waves

You give the body of water energy, the same energy that is being used to call my name

Pushing me into the waves 

And the fact that you

The moon

Is on such a higher level, by yourself

And the ocean seems to be on the same level as me

It makes me believe that I should give in to the call

And dive into the waves

 

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Poetiq1der

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...A well thought out, well written piece of Art....Respect

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Jay Beach

Peace and God's blessing to you as well my fellow poet. Thank you for the kind words.

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2b2b2

BRILLIANT WORK....BRAVO!!!

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RonnieL

Provoking piece.....salute!

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