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Really Free

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There are times when i allow you to cross my mind...what was i thinking? This is not good for me or you...need to stop this. I am freer with you than without how do I utter this? 

You give me the fix. You float onto my psyche and cause me to drift...I cant get enough of this. Life is a trip literally and you are falling...take me. How far do you think we will go before your cover is blown? Your imperfections are shown. You always make promises that you cant keep, say things you dont mean. How long do you intend to hold me hostage , keep me on this leash? Treat me like a prisoner and come to me only to be released. Your passion is spread out across your lips and teeth, down your glistening skin and drips onto your feet. Am I your only dream? only to wake up and be released? No more OK this is enough for me, all done here nothing more to see. Just want to be really free. No more leashes on me, no more chains on my feet...just want to be really free. No more trips on my psyche, no more drift my mind is made up...this is it! I Quit!!!

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2b2b2 says:

EXCELLENCE.....well crafted.....thanks for sharing!
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Corey says:

Sometimes its very difficult to stick to a decision we need to, because something is so dang good! It made me laugh a bit, cause it reads like my issue with cigarettes, all the attempts before I finally did quit. I feel you on this! Great work!
 

rhymechile says:

Thank you Corey and 2b2b2.

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