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romance 2 min read 1,064 views Mar 11, 2016

Sometimes I just look at you

Sometimes I just look at you 
 
Not staring at anything in particular 
I just like the way you look 
Admiring all your features 
Appreciating this handsome man I have the pleasure of calling mine 
 
And even though it seems like I’m daydreaming 
 
I’m not! 
 
I’m looking eye to eye with your soul 
And introducing my spirit to yours 
Engulfing every one of your emotions 
Analyzing your psyche 
Reading every page of your wordless book 
 
I like to watch you sit in silence because your silence speaks in volumes 
I already know what you want 
When you want it 
And how you want it without you even opening your mouth 
 
But I ask anyways because I love to hear your voice 
 
Sometimes I just look at you 
Trying to figure out how to tell you just how much I love you 
But every word that comes to mind is not enough 
So my mouth doesn’t open 
 
And I just lay there looking at you 
 
Constantly imbedding your image in my brain 
Because I have that type of memory 
where I recall more of what I see and less of what I hear 
And you have some how become my favorite thing to remember 
So when we’re not together I reminisce with a smile 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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2b2b2

Great piece...this is some heavy hitting admiration/adoration....well played....and genuine...thanks for sharing!

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twistedbeauty

you may be new to the vibe but you're not new to writing poetry! welcome to the vibe!

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Kewayne Wadley

Simplicity! Always the simple things Thanks for sharing. Great piece

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Corey

This was such a sensuously, loving read. It intrigued me into longing to see what you were seeing. Poetry at its finest!

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Hitsuzen

This reminds me of how I feel about my boyfriend, so it hit close to home. I thought this was a great piece, thank you for sharing it.

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SMusinga

Omg this poem is sooooo sweet and i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow its just so awesome!!!! keep up the great work hun!!

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ethomas2016

Great job! Definitely well written!

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