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Journeying A Temporary Esoteric Plane...

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Journeying A Temporary Esoteric Plane

As true as it is

And so it be—

Yet

Though one

Of the number

Is no more

We remain perpendicular

To the teeming level plane;

Traveling parallel;

Seeking an enlightening quest:

Though the cold

Dark grave

Lies before us,

Its darkness holds no fear—

 

For ours is a journey of light;

Searching the word

Without wintering end

Nor demise of summering toils;

Knowing that substitution,

Like raindrops, is temporary.

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Coalhouse says:

I felt that..
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Charles2 says:

Elegant ...journey. Though, our journey may be brief ...to fly... is our birthright, should we so choose ...it.
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mlowe5 says:

Coalhouse and Charles2, Thanks to you both for the read and time to send grasping feedback. Very much appreciated. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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mlowe5 says:

Peace and Love, love_supreme.

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