Sparkling Wine
With a smile
you pop my cork
permitting
effervescent thoughts
to fill your
champagne fluted ears.
Fermented words
I aged for years
to near perfection
for this moment
in your presence
to express them.
Sip…
Feel the sensation
of tingling
upon your lips –
like carbonation –
when we kiss –
like testing 9-volts
with the tips
of probing tongues.
I have been waiting
for this
like my empty lungs
inhaling greedily
the oxygen availed
surfacing from
the ocean’s depths.
Since the day
you and I met
so long ago,
that day your voice
smiled at me
replying, “Hi,”
to my, “Hello”
and introduction.
Could you sense
my flavor complex
even then?
See the refinement
of the wild vines I tamed
to yield this blend?
Though you showed
interest in this vintage
I had to deny your buds.
My flavors as yet
undeveloped
would have led to
to tainted love.
Now that my bouquet
is exquisite
and your palette
has matured,
allow me to
intoxicate you
with a love
that shall endure….
- HymnAgen

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love this.
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Wow
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I thoroughly enjoyed the sip of your verbiage! It was smooth and sweet! Fantastically, well done!
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Brother.. in all seriousness, I need to know... WHERE ON EARTH DO YOU PURCHASE YOUR PENS FROM? I'm serious. This piece is dope. All of your pieces are dope. I really need to know where you buy your pens from. I need a couple, man. Just one will suffice. (keep writing)
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twistedbeauty, thank you for saying so
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Poetunleashed #humbled
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corey, I'm glad you enjoyed the read. Thanks for riding with me.
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Sis, your pens work just fine. I'm still dippin quills ol kool style. j/k 'Preciate you, and your unwavering support #Respect
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So beautiful and elegant
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I held my breath til the end. As always..... Beautifully penned
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Elegant...I like that. Thank you, Tali_sosweet
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alekia abeni, wow! Humbled by your remarks. Thanks!
Read hymnagen's poemsWoven
Wow... Vibrant imagery, from beginning to end. Exquisite!
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AWESOME, lady killin', quaking dedication.....ya killed it brah!! BRAVO!!
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Woven, I really appreciate your feedback. thanks for reading!
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I see you, 2b. Thanks for checking it out, brotha. Peace
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Man, you keep flowin!. Excellent write.
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One of my recent favs. Glad you enjoyed it latin_lover
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Love the word play. This is an awesome write. Thank you for sharing this.
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And thank you for your feedback Ladypoet45
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I had to reread this one. Excellent write.
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I like this poem.
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