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romance 1 min read 1,683 views Apr 17, 2016

Sparkling Wine

With a smile

you pop my cork

permitting

effervescent thoughts

to fill your

champagne fluted ears.

Fermented words

I aged for years

to near perfection

for this moment

in your presence

to express them.

Sip…

Feel the sensation

of tingling

upon your lips –

like carbonation –

when we kiss –

like testing 9-volts

with the tips

of probing tongues.

I have been waiting

for this

like my empty lungs

inhaling greedily

the oxygen availed

surfacing from

the ocean’s depths.

Since the day

you and I met

so long ago,

that day your voice

smiled at me

replying, “Hi,”

to my, “Hello”

and introduction.

Could you sense

my flavor complex

even then?

See the refinement

of the wild vines I tamed

to yield this blend?

Though you showed

interest in this vintage

I had to deny your buds.

My flavors as yet

undeveloped

would have led to

to tainted love.

Now that my bouquet

is exquisite

and your palette

has matured,

allow me to

intoxicate you

with a love

that shall endure….

 

- HymnAgen

 

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twistedbeauty

love this.

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Poetunleashed

Wow

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corey

I thoroughly enjoyed the sip of your verbiage! It was smooth and sweet! Fantastically, well done!

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DallasCowgirl

Brother.. in all seriousness, I need to know... WHERE ON EARTH DO YOU PURCHASE YOUR PENS FROM? I'm serious. This piece is dope. All of your pieces are dope. I really need to know where you buy your pens from. I need a couple, man. Just one will suffice. (keep writing)

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hymnagen

twistedbeauty, thank you for saying so

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hymnagen

Poetunleashed #humbled

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hymnagen

corey, I'm glad you enjoyed the read. Thanks for riding with me.

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hymnagen

Sis, your pens work just fine. I'm still dippin quills ol kool style. j/k 'Preciate you, and your unwavering support #Respect

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Tali

So beautiful and elegant

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alekia abeni

I held my breath til the end. As always..... Beautifully penned

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hymnagen

Elegant...I like that. Thank you, Tali_sosweet

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hymnagen

alekia abeni, wow! Humbled by your remarks. Thanks!

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Woven

Wow... Vibrant imagery, from beginning to end. Exquisite!

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2b2b2

AWESOME, lady killin', quaking dedication.....ya killed it brah!! BRAVO!!

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hymnagen

Woven, I really appreciate your feedback. thanks for reading!

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hymnagen

I see you, 2b. Thanks for checking it out, brotha. Peace

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love_supreme

Man, you keep flowin!. Excellent write.

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hymnagen

One of my recent favs. Glad you enjoyed it latin_lover

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LP45

Love the word play. This is an awesome write. Thank you for sharing this.

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hymnagen

And thank you for your feedback Ladypoet45

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love_supreme

I had to reread this one. Excellent write.

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love_supreme

I like this poem.

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