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life 3 min read 375 views May 7, 2016

oh God

Not every thing that get you get in trouble by any authority is necessarily a “bad” thing Not everything you that you get praised for is necessarily a “good” thing What makes it *good* or *bad* is the position the “authority” has in that content of your doing. So every “authority” has a piece of our actions under its wing, every action we may participate in, in that cirmustance is to be inclined to its judgment towards it. Whether the action was bad or good we may never know. Cause we would never dare ask such questions. We cant ever see those who do the same Way . we will never be those kinds. So those kinds will start asking if their asking was up for asking. So they will never be fully their part. But the part they could be was nothing but close to joy. We are in a ***ing prision. A prision we built for ourselves. We hate each other as much as we wanna be one another. We have prides. We love lies. We wanna be real. Because we know we are not real. We get mad at the word.not knowing there is no such a thing. *** this system.why can’t we ever try to understand every where there’s that problem but in a different form that is fit for that environment. Why are we letting them separate us even within us.why can’t we ever see.that everything is ***ing cycle.and our mind is a ***ing rifle. And our thoughts the missle. Why do we get in the middle. And make shots triple.haven’t we read the riddle.it was never meant for us.cause it was never ours. We should find who isn’t for us.instead of chasing the same names we know of.we already have the army. But the army can’t attack if we can’t recognize the enemy.it was always been the army’s enemy but if the leaders are too confused the army can’t fire so let’s stop arguing what to name the army.cause it always will be the army they know what they name it and that’s nothing.what you put as the name will never change whoor what they are.let’s stop.let’s know things and more.let’s research and talk with one another. Maybe if we ever come together we may all decide in one thing.maybe the name will come when we are all working together as one. Maybe the true name was never said or thought of. Maybe it will be said right and there. Maybe we all will tolerate each other to the point where in nothingness we may agree and we will forsake our rights and the army’s rights to each name ourselves. We may do it together at once it will form oness.

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