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life 1 min read 695 views May 13, 2016

Thank You

I thank you for coming into his life when you did
Thank you for being so dang persistent 
You wanted my life,
the life me and him created
Giving him something that I could not
Helping me to open my eyes

Thank you for helping me realizes
that I was just too good to be with a guy
who did not enjoy what he had at home
Like a dog he went out and roamed
Running to the first thing that was 
willing to throw him a bone
Without you I might have been living a miserable life
Still di**notized,
I mean hypnotized,
Oh how he had that magic
Only a turn on with his pants off
He did a good job of pleasing me physically 
I was just craving something that could satisfied me spiritually and mentally

You were my intervention,
recognition that I deserve better
If the next chick can take what I thought I own
then she can have what I clearly did not hold
His love, 
His attention,
His respect
Thank you for taking that off my hands
because of you, 
I now have a true man. 

 

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2b2b2

Tight Work....ONE

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hymnagen

One door closes another one opens. This captures that notion so well. Nice!

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