“I come and I go but one day I'll have to choose my place.”

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life 1 min read 555 views Jun 5, 2016

Why?

they said ‘’Jay, why don’t you talk less hate and talk more love”

 

Why?  

Do you not understand that while writing about hate you are writing about what was once love?

 

Do you not know that love is the root of all hate?

 

You cannot simply meet love without later running into her friend hate.  

 

You cannot simply live your life pretending hate does not exist, why do you do that? 

 

Do you hate yourself so much as to avoid your own thoughts and coat them with sugar?

 

I ask you, why don’t you start expressing your own hate and speak up for once? instead of pretending everything is love and joy

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