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rain

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Its that rain again

thrust was longed on these pains

Hope they are not stains

And just clogged ashes in them drains

I promised I’ll be fine with bents

How could a soul have dents

Tainted so dense

One last time let me say its intense

I know it spells a mess

These clouds are only good for suspense

But it’s just only true nonetheless


 

 

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PoeticKnight239 says:

wow incredible
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The Immortal Wize says:

Very poetic!!!

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mlowe5 says:

Beautifully penned. Whatever the pain--the joy, its true nonetheless. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed the read. Peace and Love.

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