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life 1 min read 372 views Jun 19, 2016

water

I think most of my stories ends early

 But why does it seem it's with everybody

Why do I feel muddy Is this just another part or am I just dirty

I  till wish there's some one who's not scared to see me

I still wish there's some thing I can do to figure out this theory

Now I choose to washout and free

Am done now I will not grow a tree

I will not change who I am to a fee

I don't know exactly where am going so I will not flee

I just need a water that can crack this brick

I will probably end up naked, it's fine long as I make it

I Just pray i brake it

Man I ain't felt the sun in a minute

Wait a minute Now

I'm feeling it

What it would feel like to feel like this

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