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I have been so lost, everyday my soul lost

Oh hold on I think now my soul is lost

Now its that what I lost

Here take the blame. fast,fast

F*ck that, s*it is a crass

Lots of feelings in my heart

Gots to know just where to start

I said am done, damn maybe its that part

Will I erver relate to this art

So beautiful why bluntly stare at

This must be god

So confused I must be doing bad

Only floating on what I had

I hope I was just sad

But am also mad

That's why I run around

Does it happen cause its bound? 

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latin_lover says:

This one was a mind bender. Excellent write.

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RonnieL says:

Had me thinking through this piece. Nice write.
 

yuhi says:

This is so sweet and adorable..... you really do have mad skills with a pencil!!!!

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