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life 1 min read 545 views Jun 22, 2016

My visit to Hell

I was traumatized, jumbled, bemused

as I entered the Hell's gate,

Not by the a level of suffering,

by the lake of fire or the Sha'arei Maveth,

the sound of a thousand tears,

like softly pattering wings.

 

In the center of this place is a great fire,

like an ocean of raging flames.

There was weeping and gnashing of teeth,

They scream for mercy yet NO one cares or hears!

Red hot pain in their blood rivers of faces, lava, vomit and blood,

it looks like a flood!

 

Flames everywhere yet they cast NO light!

All they have is every kind of pain, terror, torture, and fright!

There is Numbnuts the false preacher,

Who sexually abuses my neighbour’s kid?

Next to him was Cupcake Face, the liar,

Shell Down Cooper, who I always thought

Was rotting away in hell,

Was never here,

Surely he is in Heaven.

 

I was lost in a sea of nameless faces,

Uttering wild cries like a creature in pain,

My heart swelled with a sea of tears,

I vanish into thin air, like ghosts at the crow.

By Seth Yuhi Musinga

 

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