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first love 2 min read 672 views Jun 29, 2016

Hypnotic

Just her eyes alone has me in a zone.. Honey is the color.. So like a bee I'm attracted.. Skin tone chocolate, as thick and creamy as it comes.. Smooth as peanut butter and soft as Carolina cotton...I'm intrigued.. I can't stare too long or these angelic qualities of this Nubian queen will lock me in.. Suffocating me with pleasure and thoughts that I shouldn't have.. I shake it .. She smiles and my heart beats uncontrollably.. She grins and parades away enticing me with her hips and caboose.. Yea she knows what she's doing.. Pulling my strings like a puppet master... I'm no longer steering this ship.. At this moment she could get whatever she wants.. My body begins to react to her rhythmic dance.. Palms sweaty, mind racing and externals rising.. Embarrassed I'm not, excited I am. She speaks and her lips pull me in even closer.. On the edge of my seat and I can't speak.. So many words I could use but I'm speechless.. Her presence has me imprisoned within myself.. Seconds seem like hours and there's finally distance.. I begin to come down but my head still Stuck in the clouds as her perfume lingers in my nose like smoke in the sky.. Now outta site,my heart beat returns to normal and I have possession of my body again. Hours later here she comes... I try to avoid her like a bill Collector but she can read me and wants to take me for a ride again. She approaches me and the out of body experience begins.. Watching as she pushes buttons and Navigates through my mind, body and soul.. This women has worn me down... Mentally  exhausted from dodging seductive thoughts of peaches, grapes and canto lopes:) all day.. I finally give in to the thoughts.. Allowing her to control more of my mind leading to access to my body. She speaks and I react, doing all things she tells me too like a well trained animal.. This hold she has on me is new but with an open mind I'm willing to try new things.. 

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RonnieL

Feeling this piece...very nice write!

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WarriorCarryingWater

Been there playboy, dats wify right there! You got game.

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mrmelody7

This a good live wire write you doing somethin write my man the chase used to be the fun part for me once I capture her the challenge is gone

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I like this poem.

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