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life 1 min read 540 views Jun 30, 2016

deity

Today God talked to me in my own way

Who I am understand what he say

Although I knew that I would pay

Guess now I can say I kind of overstand

On my shaky ground

For a little bit it didn't roll around

Yes I said am proud

I shout I shout no more doubt

I'm here, will you turn around?

rounds to round

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love_supreme

I am completely coming around to your style. Nice flow!

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Mellow

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I like this poem.

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