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romance 1 min read 870 views Jul 29, 2016

Especially for you (for him )

I am smothered by love.. I am waiting,

 Patiently to be taken……….

Seriously.

The love I have to give is simplicity

I can’t seem to understand the meaning of this feeling.

Your words spoken aloud, reads me your heart.

Seems to be surrounded and drowned by the dark.

You live in a past of pain and distrust; I want things to be different for you, like we discussed,

Plant me the seed of strength and security & I the same for you.

Let me redefine your perception of what a woman is.

But if only you knew I maybe …her….

That exquisite breakthrough.

My heart says pursue this and see where this goes, my mind is shrieking

No!

I am smothered by love.. I am waiting,

 Patiently to be taken……….

Seriously.

The meaning is to be not taken but taken seriously.

I wrote this especially for you.

These words are words of truth.

I do not categorize myself with other women my age

I am different. I am patient…I am waiting,….

To be taken…. Seriously

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RonnieL

Dope my queen! Feelin this, thx for sharing

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reddrenee__

thank you .

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after vision

my poet, Let me redefine your perception of what a woman is.-- in my current status I wished that this woman exist within one hundred miles of memphis

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Ak rio

Whoa ok ok I see the inner poet in you burning with desire keep the fire lit I can dig it

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I like this poem.

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