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romance 1 min read 530 views Aug 2, 2016

aye eye captain

Finally its right, this one is goodbye

My heart aches tight, but I don’t feel so alive

Isn’t this supposed to be the thing I thought that I like

Or was I just another lie

I felt you on the first hi

Then I claimed you “my”

Then you became me, named you “I”

Kissed my lips oh so nice

Don’t mind those, they don’t know what its like

To have you on my side

You the reason I smile

But something told me to hide

Guess you were my low tide

Been to over worry me, think that was the last ride  

Couldn’t ask you so just went aside

My road has been aligned

The sign said in last highlight

You should still dress white

Walk so light

Talk what you write

Don’t leave out, don’t ever bite

Your lips deserve a chance

Even if its for a little while

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jtj1982

I get it!!!

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love_supreme

Excellent write!

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AFter vision

my poet and my low tide - my joy ebbs and flows with the depth of this wonderful write

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