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just different 2 min read 741 views Aug 4, 2016

Deception His and Hers Fatal Flaws

 
 
He dresses to the "Nines" when he is on the prowl. The vulnerable and innocent his daily fare.

His stealth approach is methodical and calculated. By the time she realizes something is amiss, he has moved onto and past his next three victims.

He begins with flattery. Following up with declarations of epically profound feelings. The emotions in question are the "pass key" which affords him entrance into her temple of womanhood and sensual satisfaction.

Once he has stamped his name into her honey pot with powerful penile thrusts, she forfeits her ownership of self to him without hesitation. THIS IS HER fatal flaw #1.

The cash, debit and credit he solicits from her are bestowed upon him with genuflected gratitude. The regular bedroom shenanigans render her inert and incapable of seeing, realizing and accepting the truth of her Beloved. THAT IS HER fatal flaw #2.

Strange behavior, missed commitments, lackluster coitus, refusals of explanations, unfamiliar scents upon the sheets and his clothes begin to paint an illustration of doubt; which she blindly ignores. THAT IS HER fatal flaw #3.

His escape, planned from the onset, is foiled by a series of miscalculations on his part. The greatest being, he remains too long and she finally gets clued in. THAT IS HIS fatal flaw #1.

Turntables are not only for records. Some are the brilliant moves of a mastermind bent on recompense and egotistical satisfaction. He failed to recognize her potential to wreak havoc in his well ordered life. THAT IS HIS fatal flaw #2.

In her systemic mind the best way to get over one man is to get under a different one and let it go down, actually. When he comes upon the knowledge of her traitorous behavior he implodes from the feelings of loss, jealousy and resignation THIS HIS FINAL FATAL FLAW!!!

Karma has everybody's address and THAT WILL come a calling!!! And she is more insistent upon an answered door than the most seasoned and dedicated Jehovah's Witness!!!

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after vision

my poet, you paint a mean truth. the flaws of love turns into the claws of war

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Excellent write.

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