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That dirty oxygen as I stop inhaling

I see that s*it burning man I thought I did the killing

But you know on the other end its wining

Point in view I liked the feeling

Seems about everything it make me feel got me running

back and forth but eventually I kept coming

Why can I not do thinking

When it comes to your being

See I don't wanna be telling

That's the cause for me falling

That love I've been describing

Got me skipping and lying

I swear look me in the eyes, can you believe am dying

With every breath I'm sighing

Became closer to that sighting

Nothing existing Just familiar:enough lighting

The dark remains frightening

For those who didn't do usual crying

Then you realize you put yourself to be Mr. mining

Your God is liking

All you do has been pointing

Everyday has been bout counting 

I get it you ain't fronting

It is what it is yeah now it's paying

That pain starts playing

That pain (with name) you were saying?

That shame, on it you've been laying

That hate , admit that was what you wearing

That love, got you worrying

That life, deep down you were carrying

That end, were about the only thing that had you caring

That circle crown, plastic, you might brake it stop reaching

I'm not here preaching

I'm calling my bluff too i wanna stop toying

I've lived enough tip toeing

Trying to get something forget risking

I wanna be alive while I'm here living

I'll get it all when its time unfolding

I'll be here for here I'm trying

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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LP45 says:

Very good. I like it.

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