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life 1 min read 650 views Aug 26, 2016

Garden Of Eden

I find refuge between your thighs.

Kisses in trail formation from your toes leading to your promise land.

My tongue finds salvation between your lips.

A hiding place from the evils in this world while engulfed in your waters.

And like a man dying from thirst, I drink from you.

Finding sanctuary inside your fine trimmed garden where no snakes dare show their face.

I have truly found the garden of Eden.

A place for my mouth to roam.

And in it is one apple that when eaten

Gives off and abundant amount of your trees secretions.

A place that my tongue will be happy to call home. 

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after vision

my poet, that truly is the garden of Eden

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love_supreme

Excellent write.

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