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romance 1 min read 310 views Sep 27, 2016

Dizzy

A rollercoaster of whimsy

You make my body flimsy

When you smile, I need to sit down

for awhile, Oh mercy, you make

me wonder why the world isn't

better with you in it, when you show

up, the whole block is a witness,

they can't believe your style,

the ladies love your style, but

you are mine, all the time,

you take my hand, in my mind

I hear a band, playing our love

song, all day long, playing in

such harmony, that's you and me

Your make me dizzy.

 

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mrmelody7

A very enjoyable poem keep at it

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